The new and improved Hungry cutscene

So, for a while I have been stuck on these cutscenes. Knowing I still had to improve them and so on. But I didn't know how. I was becoming blind for our project. So I asked one of my teachers for help. He pointed out why some shots worked and others didn't. I spend some time correcting or replacing some shots. I can feel now that the cutscene works waaaaay better and with some other touch ups it will be ready for animation.